nice word!geng ya!!! =Dnice picture also XD
aiks... not geng la..jz coincidence got some words in my mind jek...the 2nd 1 actualy got some words like that : 顶！我都还没有玩够就要出去了已经很不爽还要来一趟巴士刺激我串我！ then it seems i cant 美化 these words nicely...2nd pic failed
時間可否停留多一秒鐘，讓我在此稱霸？呵呵呵，加油哦！不要埋沒才華呢。
这么快就来了，谢谢探访！看来你的文采好很多呢！你也加油! ;)
穿梭在钟楼前的巴士载着游子回家的心也载着他们离家的情我愿此刻能停留让这片土地继续见证我的美好回忆
wow! another nice 文采 d! kean wei i now baru know u so geng in writing d lo! salute! /(^^)
aiya... if the 1st pic din see that white car, then can say is 路霸 la... just that part of the car n spoil the pic...the bus 1, last 4 sentense not so 顺口。。。
aiya let u spot the white car tim...i ad search the 1 with least appearance of it geh la(i used mutlishot) the bus 1 u giv some sugestion wat shud write in last senence..i edit lei edit hui also not nice 1
远处的云相似赶着过来和我道别但迎面而来的巴士却欢欢喜喜地回家去this sounds better???
i got think sthg like that...but the bus not belong to kampar geh wor..so not consider back home? so i jau 避免 use 回家 lo...
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nice word!
geng ya!!! =D
nice picture also XD
aiks... not geng la..jz coincidence got some words in my mind jek...
the 2nd 1 actualy got some words like that : 顶！我都还没有玩够就要出去了已经很不爽还要来一趟巴士刺激我串我！ then it seems i cant 美化 these words nicely...2nd pic failed
時間可否停留多一秒鐘，
讓我在此稱霸？
呵呵呵，加油哦！
不要埋沒才華呢。
这么快就来了，谢谢探访！
看来你的文采好很多呢！你也加油! ;)
穿梭在钟楼前的巴士
载着游子回家的心
也载着他们离家的情
我愿此刻能停留
让这片土地
继续见证我的
美好回忆
wow! another nice 文采 d! kean wei i now baru know u so geng in writing d lo! salute! /(^^)
aiya... if the 1st pic din see that white car, then can say is 路霸 la... just that part of the car n spoil the pic...
the bus 1, last 4 sentense not so 顺口。。。
aiya let u spot the white car tim...i ad search the 1 with least appearance of it geh la(i used mutlishot)
the bus 1 u giv some sugestion wat shud write in last senence..i edit lei edit hui also not nice 1
远处的云相似赶着过来和我道别
但迎面而来的巴士却欢欢喜喜地回家去
this sounds better???
i got think sthg like that...but the bus not belong to kampar geh wor..so not consider back home? so i jau 避免 use 回家 lo...
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